I'm using the name Water Hazard for the first book, and you can find a synopsis and table of contents on the new Water Hazard page.
As you have experienced, Water Hazard needs a lot of editing, but I've decided to continue forward on to the next part of the story for two reasons. 1 - I'm excited to continue the story and want to write it while I'm still excited about it, and 2 - I want to get a good understanding of the complete story so that the choices I make when I go back to edit Water Hazard make sense with regard to the bigger picture.
Once I do go back and get Water Hazard in decent shape, I will need some beta readers. If you are interested in being a beta reader for this story, please contact me.
Thanks for reading!